Hmm I have no real critique actually. I found it to be a good read. As far as the actual writing goes it's well written. Good imagery and metaphorical content. Only critism I think one might have is if they don't agree with the views or beliefs addressed in this piece. I'm not in that catagory though don't worry. Quite bright really.
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Originally Posted by sepia
He read my mind saying 'the taxidermists must have been busy when they made the city. all these people that have died here, portrayed and modelled into buildings with no feel nor emotions.'
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I like those lines especially. It's a good play on words.
Asta!!