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HedwigStrange · 06-21-2008, 12:38 PM

ooh, I like. Nice twist, very nice twist.

The story got better as it went along - Carmella seemed like an one-dimensional stereotype of a cruel madame at first, but she really develops.. erm.. a realness, as the story goes on.

06-21-2008, 12:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
HedwigStrange Tilted	ooh, I like. Nice twist, very nice twist. The story got better as it went along - Carmella seemed like an one-dimensional stereotype of a cruel madame at first, but she really develops.. erm.. a realness, as the story goes on.