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Need help finding gramatical errors and stuff...plz help
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09-15-2003, 01:20 PM
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Tirian
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From the last paragraph ...
"The more one gets to know about Memphis, the more there is to them."
...the more there is to who ?? this may be an unidentified pronoun.
I hope that helps.
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