Morning
 

The morning is madness,
my eyes open and they scream.
dried is the residual that once coated my dreams
now frozen upon the torture of daylight.
The sleeping of my mind shutters and trembles
hypnotic is the punch of reality that throws me into a streaming shower of water.
now purified for the day
I am in a fit of dillusionment.

this made me smile. tee hehe

Best feeling of the day.

i know the feeling man....after a friday night...WOOH!

Yea, I know how you feel. A fit of......
Good writing, Thanks

Great piece! It made me smile. Life is nothing more than living a dillusional dream. :)

Thanks a lot , I'm glad you all were able to get a kick out of it :)

good morning!

...like a good slap in the face! I needed that...

:)

I love the shower line especially.