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SnotGoblin 06-16-2004 11:17 PM

Another contrubiton..
 
There I was
sitting in the grass
Wondering
of what I am

Asking myself
where do I go
thoughful
of what I am

I am a man
I must say
Curious
of what I am

What is it
that I think
Astonished
of what I am

J.R.V.A. 06-17-2004 05:15 AM

Yes!!! This is killer. Thanks

vonstalhein 06-17-2004 11:30 AM

In the words od Dean Moriarty 'Ah! Yass! Dig that!'

Very 'On The Road' and very nice.

Memnoch 06-17-2004 01:00 PM

I like the repitition at the end of each verse. Contemplative, I like. :)

ForgottenKnight 06-20-2004 08:34 PM

This one is great! The reputition is very well done!:thumbsup::thumbsup: Thanks for contrubiting!


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