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xray21 07-15-2004 07:53 PM

Thats My Life
 
I think about life
Not knowing where Im going
Kinda Knowing where I have been
Looking for another road
One with more plains and not so many hills
I THINK!!
I stared death in the eye..
I won!!
Dont have a dad
Im doing fine
Moms a drunk
Im doing fine
Brothers in prison
Im doing fine
Or am I?
I think about life
Im all alone...
No famly by myside...
The scars on my body
Tell me like a story
Im not doing fine
I took the wrong exit
Im on the wrong road.......
Yet I wont take another exit...

skullfunk 07-15-2004 09:02 PM

I like it. You actually use literary techniques, unlike some of the poems in this forum.

xray21 07-15-2004 10:00 PM

Thank u brother..
I just write and how it comes out it comes out..


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