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divagrrrl 09-09-2004 06:27 PM

Another sonnet
 
"Father Green"

by Meliesa

"I'm sorry, but your flight has been delayed,"
the tired-looking ticket-taker droned.
A woman slept and snored; her legs were splayed
so wide that Father turned away and groaned.
A disembodied voice said, "Someone's phoned
for Father Green." The static cackled high
and crunching, munching through the great unknown.
But Father Green just heaves a sobbing sigh
and chooses to ignore that voice on high.
He can't ingnore the din within his head
reminding him how much he hates to fly;
he vows next time to take the bus instead.
And nowhere does he find within this host
a sign of Father, Son, or Holy Ghost.

Chthonius 09-10-2004 02:34 PM

Again, very nice.

For some reason it quite reminds me of Poe. I'm not sure. It could well just be that I've been reading to much "modern" - which is usually not to my taste (despite the fact that I seem doomed to write it) - poetry of late... so when I read this elegantly worded sonnet, with its sibilence, and sense of flow I jumped to that master Poe.

Excellent. Truly excellent.

J.R.V.A. 09-21-2004 05:11 AM

This made me laugh.. Thanks


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