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Free-verse poem

Discussion in 'Tilted Art, Photography, Music & Literature' started by davynn, Jan 17, 2012.

  1. davynn

    davynn Getting Tilted

    Location:
    East coast U.S.A.
    Leah

    Silently ... raptly,
    I adore my dusky lover.
    Firm sweet body
    Limned by the waning light.
    Queenly ... radiant,
    as she contemplates the spreading darkness.
    Innocent of intent,
    She transcends mortal charm.
    Dark shimmering tresses
    touch sweet perfect shoulders.
    Her ivory negligee, a translucent thought,
    Caresses her artistically sculpted back, waist,
    And intimately cleft buttocks.
    Seeing her thus
    I cannot profane this sublime enchantment,
    Not with a single softly spoken word,
    Nor the most ethereal touch.

    Inspired by a picture I took of Leah as she looked out my bedroom window as the sun was setting ... my first venture into the world of free verse poetry.
     
  2. Bear Cub

    Bear Cub Goes down smooth.

    You had me at ivory negligee.
     
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  3. davynn

    davynn Getting Tilted

    Location:
    East coast U.S.A.
    She had me too. ;)
     
  4. wyopen

    wyopen Getting Tilted

    Location:
    Montana
    Sweet
    More needed...please continue
     
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  5. greywolf

    greywolf Slightly Tilted

    Very nice, evocative.
     
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  6. This is nice, paints a picture but also evokes a feeling
     
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  7. ThomW

    ThomW Vertical

    Well, there you are again, way beyond “My First Lesbian Experience.”

    Adoration of transcendent transluscence is indeed ethereal enchantment.