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Old 06-30-2004, 06:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Large colored character please C&C

Give me some C&C if you want. I'm going to color this soon but it will take a while because its rather large (full resolution is 1200x1800) the character is named ayumi and I created her a while back in high school.

EDIT: I edited the lineart to give it a bit of depth with line width variation and fixed a few mistakes.

EDIT: colored version is up now

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Old 06-30-2004, 06:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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In case anyone is interested, here is the initial sketch. Sorry about double posting ^_^;
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Old 06-30-2004, 12:10 PM   #3 (permalink)
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To return the compliment.... nice work. I particularly like the initial sketch. It has a lot of character, and it is more individual to you. Maybe worth developing that. I know we all suffer from the tendancy to try to make things look neat and acceptable, rather than messily exploring our own individuality. That's risky - especially when others are going to see it. Yes?
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Old 06-30-2004, 12:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I love the girl's outfit...so sexy!
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Old 06-30-2004, 01:20 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Lewis: Thank you ^__^ I too enjoy the initial sketch. I've already explored my individuality quite a bit. I have shown some of those more explorative works on these boards in the past and I don't find it all too risky =D right now I'm trying to create a very polished image though, and so, the sketchy style takes a backseat while i create this peice.

kelly: thanks ^__^
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Old 06-30-2004, 04:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I very much like the style, color, and line quality. I really like the line quality.

However, her proportions are kind of off. Her breasts are much too high, even for small ones. I think if you moved them down about half to three quarter's thier current height they would be more accurately placed.

Overall great job!
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Old 06-30-2004, 04:41 PM   #7 (permalink)
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marsfyre, you surprize me on a daily basis...
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Old 06-30-2004, 05:27 PM   #8 (permalink)
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yaki: sorry, you're wrong, i looked at a reference picture and drew my sketch off of it, I didn't change the positioning of the chest area. Mind you I almost agree, but I used a reference picture to try and get away from drawing the same body type over and over and that is where the breasts were.

animosity: thanks I think =D
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Old 06-30-2004, 07:38 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I stand that they're too high. The curve of the breast does not start at the collarbone.

A tutorial I've found useful: http://www.sequentialtart.com/archiv.../bb_0702.shtml
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Old 06-30-2004, 07:56 PM   #10 (permalink)
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ok i see what happened now, I actually jsut failed to communicate how far shes actually supposed to be leaning back
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Old 06-30-2004, 09:56 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Very cool! I really love the style of the paint job.
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Old 07-10-2004, 10:37 AM   #12 (permalink)
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excellent as usual, marsfyre.
it's very revealing and illuminating to see the work forming the underlying structure for your graphic and color effects.
thanks much!
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Old 07-15-2004, 06:50 PM   #13 (permalink)
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great great great work.. I really like it (if you couldnt tell)

Love the colouring
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