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Thunderball · 11-24-2004, 10:00 PM

This is one of the first serious charcoles i did for money

Dizzet · 11-24-2004, 11:07 PM

Damn its nice very much indeed you are really good at life drawing

Thunderball · 11-24-2004, 11:42 PM

Thank you dizzet I appreciate that from a fellow Dane

Dizzet · 11-25-2004, 12:13 AM

Ohh it was you diddent see that.... well that explains why you have this talent...

Thunderball · 11-25-2004, 12:23 AM

lol needed that

Nancy · 11-25-2004, 02:29 AM

fabelagtigt!

how much for a portrait?

Thunderball · 11-25-2004, 10:50 AM

it depends on what it is size ect...

MEAD · 12-04-2004, 10:14 PM

It's a great exhibiton of your command form and the ability to draw hings realisticly, but its just not very exciting, its too gray. I mean I would kick up the contrast between the darkest and lightest parts.

skier · 12-04-2004, 11:12 PM

This is a fantastic piece of artwork. Would like to see more motion/energy in the piece though. Seems like the horse is doing at most a trot round that barrel. Unless that's intended? The only other thing would be the horse's left ear. seems not quite right to me...

Anyways don't let my nitpick affect how you see the quality of the overall work. I think it's just superb work and I would love to see some more.

Thunderball · 12-05-2004, 09:56 AM

[QUOTE=skier]This is a fantastic piece of artwork. Would like to see more motion/energy in the piece though. Seems like the horse is doing at most a trot round that barrel. Unless that's intended? The only other thing would be the horse's left ear. seems not quite right to me...

The ear is a little off, this is the first serious pic I did a long time ago. The horse is a barrell racer and he is limited to his speed around the barrels. As far as the light darks go the camera shot was bad, the flash lighted it up to much unfortunatly......

skier · 12-05-2004, 05:37 PM

I've seen many a barrel race- when going around that barrel the horse doesn't slow much. I'm just saying the turn is a very action-packed scene: lots of footing kicked up, a heavy lean from the horse, etc. Lots of energy and movement.

But with the kid on, maybe it's a slower thing?

hinddee29 · 12-05-2004, 06:57 PM

Very nice drawing, and very clean.

Shane

Thunderball · 12-05-2004, 07:55 PM

It is because of the kid, and also I didnt pick pic they sias "well give you $200.00 to draw this!" and i siad "Um, ok!"

-Ever- · 12-05-2004, 08:33 PM

Very nice! And I agree, adding more environmental things like haze in the sky and dirt kicking up would only add to it's appeal

-T

FngKestrel · 12-05-2004, 10:49 PM

Very nice! The body of the horse looks incredible and the boy's shirt looks good. Only complaints: Barrel bottom looks like a box and background is a little plain.

Nice work!

Thunderball · 12-06-2004, 05:13 PM

Only complaints: Barrel bottom looks like a box and background is a little plain.

Unfortanatly the bottom of the barrel looks square cause it was dug into the dirt, I Guess i could have fixed it but I rushed to get it done thats why the background is the way it is

11-24-2004, 10:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	The horse rider This is one of the first serious charcoles i did for money __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

11-24-2004, 11:07 PM	#2 (permalink)
Dizzet Psycho Location: Denmark	Damn its nice very much indeed you are really good at life drawing __________________ I am a pretty little Girl Last edited by Dizzet; 11-25-2004 at 12:28 AM..

11-24-2004, 11:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	Thank you dizzet I appreciate that from a fellow Dane __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

11-25-2004, 12:13 AM	#4 (permalink)
Dizzet Psycho Location: Denmark	Ohh it was you diddent see that.... well that explains why you have this talent... __________________ I am a pretty little Girl

11-25-2004, 12:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	lol needed that __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

11-25-2004, 02:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
Nancy Femme Fatale Location: Elysium	fabelagtigt! how much for a portrait? __________________ I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

11-25-2004, 10:50 AM	#7 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	it depends on what it is size ect... __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

12-04-2004, 10:14 PM	#8 (permalink)
MEAD Insane Location: South Florida	It's a great exhibiton of your command form and the ability to draw hings realisticly, but its just not very exciting, its too gray. I mean I would kick up the contrast between the darkest and lightest parts.

12-04-2004, 11:12 PM	#9 (permalink)
skier Rawr! Location: Edmontania	This is a fantastic piece of artwork. Would like to see more motion/energy in the piece though. Seems like the horse is doing at most a trot round that barrel. Unless that's intended? The only other thing would be the horse's left ear. seems not quite right to me... Anyways don't let my nitpick affect how you see the quality of the overall work. I think it's just superb work and I would love to see some more. __________________ "Asking a bomb squad if an old bomb is still "real" is not the best thing to do if you want to save it." - denim

12-05-2004, 09:56 AM	#10 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	[QUOTE=skier]This is a fantastic piece of artwork. Would like to see more motion/energy in the piece though. Seems like the horse is doing at most a trot round that barrel. Unless that's intended? The only other thing would be the horse's left ear. seems not quite right to me... The ear is a little off, this is the first serious pic I did a long time ago. The horse is a barrell racer and he is limited to his speed around the barrels. As far as the light darks go the camera shot was bad, the flash lighted it up to much unfortunatly...... __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

12-05-2004, 05:37 PM	#11 (permalink)
skier Rawr! Location: Edmontania	I've seen many a barrel race- when going around that barrel the horse doesn't slow much. I'm just saying the turn is a very action-packed scene: lots of footing kicked up, a heavy lean from the horse, etc. Lots of energy and movement. But with the kid on, maybe it's a slower thing? __________________ "Asking a bomb squad if an old bomb is still "real" is not the best thing to do if you want to save it." - denim

12-05-2004, 06:57 PM	#12 (permalink)
hinddee29 Upright Location: Orrville,Ohio	Very nice drawing, and very clean. Shane

12-05-2004, 07:55 PM	#13 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	It is because of the kid, and also I didnt pick pic they sias "well give you $200.00 to draw this!" and i siad "Um, ok!" __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

12-05-2004, 08:33 PM	#14 (permalink)
-Ever- Junkie Location: San Francisco	Very nice! And I agree, adding more environmental things like haze in the sky and dirt kicking up would only add to it's appeal -T __________________ Embracing the goddess energy within yourselves will bring all of you to a new understanding and valuing of life. A vision that inspires you to live and love on planet Earth. Like a priceless jewel buried in dark layers of soil and stone, Earth radiates her brilliant beauty into the caverns of space and time. Perhaps you are aware of those who watch over your home And experience of this place to visit and play with reality. You are becoming aware of yourself as a gamemaster... --Acknowledge your weaknesses--

12-05-2004, 10:49 PM	#15 (permalink)
FngKestrel Junkie	Very nice! The body of the horse looks incredible and the boy's shirt looks good. Only complaints: Barrel bottom looks like a box and background is a little plain. Nice work!

12-06-2004, 05:13 PM	#16 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	Only complaints: Barrel bottom looks like a box and background is a little plain. Unfortanatly the bottom of the barrel looks square cause it was dug into the dirt, I Guess i could have fixed it but I rushed to get it done thats why the background is the way it is __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"