hinddee29

Hi everyone these are some of my drawings that I've done.
I hope to do this full time some day, but I'm still working on my
portfolio before I try to sell anything.
I would love to here feedback on them. Even if it's bad I'd like to
know why you don't so I can make the next one better.
Thanks,

Shane

Ishmal

thats some good stuff hinddee29... i'm a fan of your work. do you know thoses chicks or did u draw them from your head???

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pinkie

Wow, i love those. They are hot, and well done.

indigochild111

Wow, you can draw people very realistically. I like the eyes

krwlz

Very very nice man, incredibly realistic.

Nancy

holy shit that's awesome!

The third one looks perfect but I do see some "errors" in the others.

1# Her left wrist/lower part of the arm looks kinda fat compared to the upper part of the arm. And the string on the bra seems to just suddenly stop. The rest is hiding behind her muscles because of the particular pose I assume but I think you should have brought that out just a tad more

3# The black area (eye lids) on her right eye is too big compared to the left.

4# The same problem as in 3#. I really miss some life in those eyes. You do an EXCELLENT job of making detailed, realistic lips, eyes etc but the eyes looks kinda foggy/dead to me.

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hinddee29

Thanks everyone for your feedback.

Ishmal No I don't do these off the top of my head. Wish I could it would save
alot of time and problems with copyrights.
I have talked through email to a couple of ex. playmates and models that I have done drawings for. Some time after the new year I should be doing photoshoots with my photographer so I can start working on my own copyrighted stuff.

Far as being realistic I think I have along way to go before that happens.

Nacy errors what are you talking about. No just messing with you this is what
I really was looking for.
The arm on the first one is messed up I've spent many hour trying to fix it.
So much I almost started to mess up the Illustration Board. I don't know why but that's as good as I could get.
As for the Bra your right I should of done that. Til now I never notice it. Thanks, you would think I would of notice it. I guess looking at it for so long you miss things.

The portraits drawings I have to agree with you again. These where my first
and second time drawind a portrait and they came way better than I first thought when I started them.

I'll leave you with a couple more. The first one will be my very first try at
drawing a pin-up/human. The first one in the drawings I already posted
is my latest drawing so you all can see If I've improved or not.Thanks again.

Shane

indigochild111

In the first pic the hair seems to be a little...overpowering?

That said, I really like the second picture. Her lips look so sensual, and I like your use of shading

Fly

great drawings man..........can't beat the female form.


thanx eh.....

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Nancy

Looks great to me...

I see that you did MUCH better with the eyes on that last picture!

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I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

alarment13

nice drawings, you have a thing for pron women eh?
the only think I would say is mix up your subject matter some, it will be good practice

hinddee29

Not sure what you mean by porn women? I wouldn't call an ex. playmate
some that was in the porn business.
I can do other subjects, but i would rather draw the female figure

Thanks,

Shane

GraveTaker

i know that i wouldn't even come remotely close to any of your drawings because they are simply amazing but if i would have to point out some minor errors, they would have to be:
pic1 same prob with the right arm that it's too fat compared to the others, and that the shadow under the right breast needs to be lightened a little bit so that it doesn't look like part of the bra.

pic2 her nose and mouth don't align properly with where her chin is located

pic3 the ear ring should be a bit more to the right and brought lower just a bit very little

i'm sorry to sound like such a an a$$ but to me that's what i see wrong with those pics if i had to pick out. Either way those are amazing drawings

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FngKestrel

Wow, pretty nice. I'd have to say your first one is the most realistic. The other ones appear to have some linework in the hair that detracts from the drawing. Like my old art instructor used to say, "There are no lines in nature."

hinddee29

GraveTaker thanks for your input. I do see what you are talking about.

FngKestrel very try about the line in nature. I have some real problems with
drawing hair. I've been trying to find something that so how to do hair, but
haven't been able to find anything online. Thanks for your help.

Shane

GraveTaker

no problem, i don't think that you would be able to draw a naked woman for me by any chance woud you?...lol jks

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