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viveleroi0 · 06-04-2003, 01:44 PM

All comments welcome

Dream

by viveleroi0

Joy is the harmony which appears,
From leaves roused from a gentle breeze.
Contentment is the warmth that rises,
From the sun soothing husks of wheat.
Sadness is the somber gloominess,
From clouds hung low about to weep.
Nature is a show hard to picture,
Being anything but a dream.

Vertigo · 06-06-2003, 02:05 AM

No comments on this yet..

I like it.

Eowyn_Vala · 06-24-2003, 07:55 AM

I like it! There is feeling in this. It almost seems to short, like you don't want it to end.

J.R.V.A. · 06-24-2003, 03:40 PM

Nice emotions. I like this a lot. Thanks for sharing with us.

troit · 06-25-2003, 02:22 PM

To me this means...

Nature is symbolic of life and we perceive emotions from the correlation we make between nature and reality, so leaves may perform a joyous dance, husks of wheat stand tall to bask in the warmth of the sun, and dark low rain clouds pour out like the heavy sadness that weighs down our hearts.

viveleroi0 · 06-25-2003, 02:38 PM

Quite so. My initial idea was to show how much of an influence the motion and images I see around me are... Nature itself directly affects my emotions, and this is my realization of that.

Angel · 06-25-2003, 04:39 PM

Ah, you touched a spot within me where I sing and dance. Nature is my world. A feel good piece!
Thank you

fallen_angel · 07-20-2003, 08:02 PM

very insightfull thank you for sharing

06-04-2003, 01:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
viveleroi0 Psycho Location: Oregon	"dream" All comments welcome Dream by viveleroi0 Joy is the harmony which appears, From leaves roused from a gentle breeze. Contentment is the warmth that rises, From the sun soothing husks of wheat. Sadness is the somber gloominess, From clouds hung low about to weep. Nature is a show hard to picture, Being anything but a dream. __________________ "It's not that I don't understand, it's that I don't care" - Homer Simpson

06-24-2003, 07:55 AM	#3 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	I like it! There is feeling in this. It almost seems to short, like you don't want it to end. __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

06-24-2003, 03:40 PM	#4 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Nice emotions. I like this a lot. Thanks for sharing with us. __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

06-25-2003, 02:22 PM	#5 (permalink)
troit Transfer Agent Location: NYC	To me this means... Nature is symbolic of life and we perceive emotions from the correlation we make between nature and reality, so leaves may perform a joyous dance, husks of wheat stand tall to bask in the warmth of the sun, and dark low rain clouds pour out like the heavy sadness that weighs down our hearts. __________________ I've yet to dephile myself...

06-25-2003, 02:38 PM	#6 (permalink)
viveleroi0 Psycho Location: Oregon	Quite so. My initial idea was to show how much of an influence the motion and images I see around me are... Nature itself directly affects my emotions, and this is my realization of that. __________________ "It's not that I don't understand, it's that I don't care" - Homer Simpson

06-06-2003, 02:05 AM	#2 (permalink)
Vertigo Upright Location: yo momma	No comments on this yet.. I like it.

06-25-2003, 04:39 PM	#7 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Ah, you touched a spot within me where I sing and dance. Nature is my world. A feel good piece! Thank you __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

07-20-2003, 08:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	very insightfull thank you for sharing __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel