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Old 06-15-2003, 11:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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In This World Of Nonsense And Torment

i read this recently, i will not read it now, i will share it with you...

In This World Of Nonsense And Torment

I am being devoured by myself
I yearn for freedom but have nowhere to go
I feel nothing and everything
The darkness scares me but keeps me safe

The unknown creeps toward me ready to pounce
Pain follows me closer than my shadow
Evil scurries through the alley
My future lurks around the corner

What is my future, if I even have one
What do I feel, how do I feel, if I feel
What do I have to show for my life
Am I scared of everything or just myself
Is this all I am
What am I missing
Why am I here
What is all this

I am scared so I cry
I have nothing to wipe my tears

In this world of nonsense and torment

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Old 06-18-2003, 05:59 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Did you write this? It is very good. Thanks for letting us read it
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Old 06-18-2003, 02:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This sounds like a friend of mine.
A good taste of your work. I hope you share more with us.
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Old 06-18-2003, 04:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Wow I could totally relate with that.

Excellent work.
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Old 06-19-2003, 11:11 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i wrote it last year, that part of me is better, now. thanks to all
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Old 06-20-2003, 06:36 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Very good...please keep sharing.
Release is always a good thing.
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