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Plan9 · 08-24-2007, 07:27 PM

Zilcho.

Sultana · 08-25-2007, 06:41 AM

Very enjoyable read.

This line confused me a bit: "Clarke had received the request in an anonymous voicemail box under the pretense of a flower delivery."

I appreciated the logistics details, but I enjoyed the internal dialogs of the first installment even more.

I also especially like the detail of the first part of this installment.

08-24-2007, 07:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
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08-25-2007, 06:41 AM	#2 (permalink)
Sultana Falling Angel Location: L.A. L.A. land	Very enjoyable read. This line confused me a bit: "Clarke had received the request in an anonymous voicemail box under the pretense of a flower delivery." I appreciated the logistics details, but I enjoyed the internal dialogs of the first installment even more. I also especially like the detail of the first part of this installment. __________________ "Love is a snowmobile racing across the tundra and then suddenly it flips over, pinning you underneath. At night, the ice weasels come." - Matt Groening My goal? To fulfill my potential.