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Halx 07-01-2003 10:16 PM

excuses
 
(A little free verse off the top of my head.)

a ghost of the future, I hope
she who draws my gaze from the road
my smiles are all for you
and laughs too for your hearing pleasure
as they bounce off the walls of my empty room
you've come back through time
keeping me company, warming your seat in my heart
my hidden gold which nobody sees
that makes them wonder how I get by
when I feel you there beside me all along
time is my only worry

J.R.V.A. 07-02-2003 07:08 AM

You should look at the top of that head more often, and post some more. This is really good, thanks for sharing.

Angel 07-02-2003 04:02 PM

Well you don't post much here, but when you do, you do it with a completeness that leaves me in awe!
Thank you for one more...I await the next. :)

*Nikki* 07-02-2003 05:27 PM

Excellent boss. As always....you have so much to give.;)

Minx 07-03-2003 11:17 AM

You really should post more often.....such great work.
Thank you for giving yet one more part of yourself to us. :)

little limey 07-17-2003 10:10 AM

I want to comment on this piece, saying what i liked exactly about it, but I can't say. It just all fits together.

It is so relaxing and gives me an almost nastalgic feeling (i dunno how to spell that).

Eowyn_Vala 08-01-2003 07:01 AM

I like this piece. I know that I will continue to think about it for quite some time.

chavos 08-01-2003 10:08 AM

Quote:

keeping me company, warming your seat in my heart
I love that line...i've got people like that, with reserved seating, front row...even if they've been gone too long.

Great images and great emotion...

maximus 08-02-2003 10:35 AM

great post halx, and thank you for this place in the universe where we can come to share ourselves.


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