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Old 07-06-2003, 09:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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an old poem

i found an old poem i did in school.....



- Standing here in a small mountain stream
waiting to catch the fish of my dreams
when the time comes i'll set the hook
I'll have a fish big enough or the record books
she'll go into my backing but wont snap the line
to bring in this fish will take a long time


i have always like it
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Old 07-07-2003, 02:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Very cool
Damn.. Can't imagine what your poems would be like now
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Old 07-07-2003, 04:11 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Cool lil poem... reads nice and easy, what grade were you in when you wrote it?
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Old 07-07-2003, 06:02 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Brought a smile to my face.
Thanks
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Old 07-07-2003, 08:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i think 7th or 8th grade... forget fo sho tho
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Old 07-07-2003, 08:57 PM   #6 (permalink)
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That's pretty cool. I'm not a talented poet by any stretch, but I do enjoy the short stuff like this.
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