Nightmare
 

Get out
Get out
I cant stand this
It hurts
Just leave
Get out

Pain, agony
Breathless, struggling
Run, hide
Screaming
Panic
Gasping for air

Leave me alone
Why me
Why me
Cold, wet
Limping
Hurt

Caught
Cant move, cant yell
Metal flesh
Trigger
Lightening
Silence

Sounds almost like lyrics for a Nu-Metal band.

Hey Sarah,
I'm hardly one to critique poetry. But, it sounds pretty cool to me. There are very little words, but it paints a pretty detailed picture. Thanks for sharing.