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pscott · 07-18-2003, 04:39 AM

I wrote this one about the futility of war. This was during the Vietnam war.

Where is the cool green grass
What is this that has come to pass
What is this that man has won
Who is there to see what God had done

J.R.V.A. · 07-21-2003, 05:04 AM

Very good... I really like the line What is this that man has won
Thanks for sharing

pscott · 08-03-2003, 07:26 PM

Thank You.

Esen · 08-09-2003, 04:02 PM

That was very powerfull
It provoked thought in one punch

07-18-2003, 04:39 AM	#1 (permalink)
pscott Insane	War I wrote this one about the futility of war. This was during the Vietnam war. Where is the cool green grass What is this that has come to pass What is this that man has won Who is there to see what God had done

07-21-2003, 05:04 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Very good... I really like the line What is this that man has won Thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

08-09-2003, 04:02 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	That was very powerfull It provoked thought in one punch __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

08-03-2003, 07:26 PM	#3 (permalink)
pscott Insane	Thank You.