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Old 07-21-2003, 03:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
Banned
 
Location: Autonomous Zone
A little poem written while drunk

Take me back,
and then you'll see.
See me,
see the wretch you've made.

You won't ever see me.
and I'll never return.
Return to you
to stand in your grace.

You're too perfect
and I can't compare.
Compare to your beauty,
compare to your hate.

Please take me back,
and I'll do what I want.
I want to be with you.
I want to bash your head in with a mother fucking rock.

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I honestly have no idea who/what this is about.
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Old 07-21-2003, 06:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
you know i feel the same way right now. . . thank you for expressing it for me
i really like the last line by the way
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Old 07-21-2003, 06:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
Appreciative
 
Location: Paradise
Wow! Such strong emotions for not knowing who it is about. Much better than anything I have ever come up with while intoxicated. Good stuff..
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Old 07-24-2003, 06:25 AM   #4 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Drink more lol That was good, thanks
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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Old 07-24-2003, 11:11 AM   #5 (permalink)
Insane
 
lots of anger thats for sure. Still very entertaining, so whos it about?
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Old 07-24-2003, 06:17 PM   #6 (permalink)
Crazy
 
Location: Pa
that pretty much sums up how i feel right now.....
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