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PeterPuppy · 08-06-2003, 12:07 PM

i was kinda depressed over a girl the other day... started making up a song...

I'm lonely,
No-one is around.
I'm shouting,
But I don't make a sound.
I'm crying,
The tears run down my face.
Won't somebody,
Come take my place?

I need you,
more than you need me.
I need you,
More than you can see.
I need you, I need you
I need you.
You're the one who can set me free.
You're the one who has got the key.
You're the one who will get me free,
From my cage of feelings

I'm standing,
On my own again.
I'm thinking,
I'll never see you again.
I'm acting,
Like everything's fine.
I'm knowing,
You'll never be mine

I need you,
more than you need me.
I need you,
More than you can see.
I need you, I need you
I need you.
You're the one who can set me free.
You're the one who has got the key.
You're the one who can rescue me,
From my cage of feelings

it's not finished yet, but you get the idea. comments?

maximus · 08-06-2003, 01:29 PM

nice start, hope to read the finished version, gl.

PeterPuppy · 08-06-2003, 01:47 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by maximus
nice start, hope to read the finished version, gl.

thanks

i'm gonna see if my mate's band want to use the lyrics

J.R.V.A. · 08-07-2003, 09:27 PM

SOunds like a good song

sub zero · 08-17-2003, 12:01 AM

Very sincere.

I like it (cuz it rhymes!). Now if only there were guitar tabs to it

ps: i don't play guitar really well, but i can read tabs enough to play a song

08-06-2003, 12:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
PeterPuppy Upright	my latest effort i was kinda depressed over a girl the other day... started making up a song... I'm lonely, No-one is around. I'm shouting, But I don't make a sound. I'm crying, The tears run down my face. Won't somebody, Come take my place? I need you, more than you need me. I need you, More than you can see. I need you, I need you I need you. You're the one who can set me free. You're the one who has got the key. You're the one who will get me free, From my cage of feelings I'm standing, On my own again. I'm thinking, I'll never see you again. I'm acting, Like everything's fine. I'm knowing, You'll never be mine I need you, more than you need me. I need you, More than you can see. I need you, I need you I need you. You're the one who can set me free. You're the one who has got the key. You're the one who can rescue me, From my cage of feelings it's not finished yet, but you get the idea. comments?

08-06-2003, 01:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
maximus Crazy Location: Pa	nice start, hope to read the finished version, gl. __________________ i don't want to be lonely, i just want to be alone.

08-07-2003, 09:27 PM	#4 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	SOunds like a good song __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

08-17-2003, 12:01 AM	#5 (permalink)
sub zero Addict Location: The one state that doesn't have black outs: TEXAS BABY!!!	Very sincere. I like it (cuz it rhymes!). Now if only there were guitar tabs to it ps: i don't play guitar really well, but i can read tabs enough to play a song __________________ Did you Google it yet? Join the TFP Typing team!!