Eowyn_Vala

be but death to mine own eyes
and I shall away at once
For who wouldst love
what once that doth have warmth
be now cold and like stone?
tears of mine will fall for
what becometh our love
'til time of end shall I mourn
ever shall I walk at night
in search of thy soul
living death will haunt me
as I long for your embrace
and whilst I bequeath mine own
kiss of death in search of you
be it known my love
for you doth not end with
death but lives eternal
in dark, as deep crimson red

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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it

chavos

moody and dark-i like the atypical language use-it's apropos to the subject, and sounds authentic coming from you. thanks for the great read!

J.R.V.A.

kiss of death in search of you
Great line, thanks

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

fallen_angel

very well said, i enjoyed reading this. you have a way with words that astounds me daily. I wish i could write like you but as we all know, to each his own.

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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

Eowyn_Vala

thank you everyone for your kind comments!

it is darker than what I normally write, but it felt good to write it! i don't know if i will write much more on the darker side, it all depends! this is probably one of my favorites that I have written, normally i don't have favorites!

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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it