Rainwulf

go there
i was chasing that thought then it ran away

something else dark came and took its place
what do i do?

hate? fear? forgive.. for what?
the past haunts me, jaunts me, look, see, feel..... the pain

i hurt, others, myself. hate is easier.
not hate

hate caused this
hate cant fix this

not hate?
not hate.

im confused.
your confused?

im confused!
who is who?

im him
im the other him

where did you come from?
the same place you did

we are the same?
we are the same.

help.
help yourself.

how
the past, forget it

i cant.
do it or the present and the future will be your past.

dont you see? i hurt, others and myself
so? you hurt them cos you hurt them

ok im gonna stop
you cant stop it

huh?
you cant stop what never started

what?
what?

dont do that.
well. you stop it too

dark. was good wasnt it.
yes it was. time to stop now.

but you said it never started.
it didnt.

then.... how?
look behind, inside. lower. deeper.

i see now.
but do you SEE it.

yes.
the pain is not real....

cos the emotions that caused it arent real?
correct.

who are you.
im you.

we are the same?
we are the same.

thank you.
thank you.

fallen_angel

WOW, dont know what to say but i actually kinda understood that. it also sounds alot familiar to something Eoywn_Vala read to me last night from her world lit. book. This is truely a masterpeice and everyone who read it and did not post is a morron not to notice that this is amazing. Thank you.

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Rainwulf

hey thank you for that!!! it was just something that came to me, in all places, a coffee shop in the middle of a mall.

minyn

Im so glad im not the only one who has those kind of moments.... the voices are fun friends i tell you!

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~A3 "woke up this morning"

"Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

J.R.V.A.

Thanks for sharing. Good work

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

ForgottenKnight

Very good work!
Yes, very good!
I concure!
The general sensus with all my voices seems to be that this is very good. Thanks for sharing from all of us voices in here.

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"People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

Angel

This almost gives the feel of an affair with another or oneselves other self....
I liked the impact and the emotion.
~Angel~

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In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

riptide4070

I've had moments like that with myself. I never wrote down the conversations though. Your work was a look into the inner psyche, simply amazing!!!

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"the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

mb99usa

Very cool. I have conversations with myself like that all the time. Never thought of writing it down.

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So, what's your point?

It's not an attitude, it's a way of life.

*Nikki*

Nice