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Old 04-25-2003, 11:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.
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when all is gone
the worlds amiss
i take this blade
i slice my wrist

the blood drips down
i feel the pain
i smile with delight
wonder if i'm insane

the crime is done
i'm awake
a feeling of pleasure
only i can make

everlasting hell
the cuts are clean
no more to worry
nothing is seen
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Old 05-08-2003, 12:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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your poems that run along these lines reminds me of a really ruff period I went through when I was 16-17.. The person that finally helped me through was alpha phi.....
Thank-you for this poem .
I can look back and be glad that I made it through and came out on top and with a wonderful best friend/husband.
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