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Old 10-06-2003, 08:28 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Good Bye

this poem/song is about me and my long time girlfriend breaking up.


This dormat, has wornout it's welcome
I've lost regret, while thinking of the past
You think I am, so damn simplistic
I'm feeling, like turning on the flood
I'm sick of all of this shit.
I desirve some honest answers
not just a walk around.

One day you love me
the others are grey
You say you're sorry
but it's too late.
I've lost track of time
in this empty maze
searching for answers
that were there but, never ment to be claimed

Just extending the end
watching this mushroom-cloud
float through the sky
it was a beautiful day
surrounded by lies
in a illusion on high
Today was the day
that our love died.

One day you love me
the others are grey
You say you're sorry
but it's too late.
I've lost track of time
in this empty maze
searching for answers
that were there but, never ment to be claimed

It was a grand disaster
you know it was
full of ups and downs
full of frowns and hugs
'through thick and thin'
untill the bottom, fell out
that's the day it
"didn't feel right"
so you left me with
an adios and no love

Good bye, good night
that's all that is left
nothing more nothing less.
no more 'hi's'
no more *sighs*
just one last, good bye.
"Good bye"
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Old 10-11-2003, 03:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Goodbye....one of the hardest words of all.
Nice work.
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Old 10-16-2003, 10:57 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: Boone, NC
"it so easy to say and yet so hard to do" -Ben Harper "walk away"

I'm sorry for what you lost. Love is grand and it feels as if the solid ground beneath your feet does fall out when the love is gone.

Be strong my friend.
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Old 10-17-2003, 03:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Very moving piece, thanks for sharing
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And as she plays,
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