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Old 11-04-2003, 12:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
Psycho
 
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
Obscurity

I dont want you here
But I dont want to be without you
I cant stand you seeing me like this
But I need you here to help me through this
Everything I dont want, I need
I can no longer control my world
I can feel the very bone from my spine
Being eaten slowly away
My muscles spasm in pain
Doubling me over
Weakening my reservoirs
Every turn I make
I crack a little more
My sanity is on the brink of failure
I no longer think clearly
I need you here to hold me tight
Think not of my actions toward you
Just know that I truely care

No one knows what this is like
This pain that incases my body
My strongest feature
Is now my weakest point
My center is being stolen from within
I could fail at any moment
The not knowing is the worst
I fear that fall more than life itself
For it will take my life with it
Leaving me broken
And incomplete
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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Old 11-04-2003, 03:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Charleston, SC
Very well written
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Old 11-04-2003, 04:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: Following the light...
Very nice! It's full of emotion and very well written.
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Old 11-04-2003, 07:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Location: St. Paul, MN
i can feel the intensity, something powerful and moving out of what must be something very painful for you. here's wishing to happier inspirations for you...
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Old 11-04-2003, 07:07 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Location: North East
Fuck being well written, that was beutifull.
I have always enjoyed your poetry and every time I read something of yours it reminds me of how potent you are.
That was an amazing piece of you.
Thanks
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Old 11-06-2003, 04:56 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Nice.........
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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Old 11-06-2003, 12:13 PM   #7 (permalink)
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WOW!
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Old 11-06-2003, 12:19 PM   #8 (permalink)
Keep on rolling. It only hurts for a little while.
 
Location: wherever I am
truly inspiring. noone ever wants to end up like that.
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Old 11-06-2003, 08:31 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Location: Davidson, NC/ Manassas, VA
good read, keep it up
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