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fallen_angel · 12-24-2003, 09:45 PM

Long have I traveled
Down these shadowwed halls
Accompanied by the endless echos of my past
Each opened doorway is a doorframe
Leading to all the wrongs
That I can never right
My goal is barely visible
A faint glimmering
In the distance
The challenge that lies ahead
Is all to clear
My quest is that light
But standing between
My Haven
Is my Hell
Thousands of doorways
Leading to endless destinies
Some are shortcuts
While others are set backs
The choices I make as I pass each one
Will decide my future
My happiness
My end

ForgottenKnight · 12-28-2003, 09:42 PM

I liked this so much I had to read it out loud a few times. Reading it out loud made it sound so good... WONDERFUL!

Esen · 01-03-2004, 04:51 AM

you would think that someone would put a few signs up on those doors by now

Thanks for making me think

fallen_angel · 01-07-2004, 10:03 PM

In my head I can invision this. I see myself running blindly through a darkened hall looking through each doorway, searching for something that seems so distant.

ForgottenKnight · 01-08-2004, 12:17 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by fallen_angel
In my head I can invision this. I see myself running blindly through a darkened hall looking through each doorway, searching for something that seems so distant.

What is it you search for that seems so distant?

fallen_angel · 01-08-2004, 02:42 AM

the only thing i am searching for is peace of mind. i know certain things in my future that could happen yet they are so far away i can not come close to possesing at this moment in time.

riptide4070 · 01-13-2004, 08:08 PM

the future holds endless possibilities. When we get to certain crossroads in our lives, will we choose the path we want or the path we need?

J.R.V.A. · 02-07-2004, 06:11 AM

I always enjoy reading what you write, it is pure and of the heart. thanks for sharing

12-24-2003, 09:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Door ways Long have I traveled Down these shadowwed halls Accompanied by the endless echos of my past Each opened doorway is a doorframe Leading to all the wrongs That I can never right My goal is barely visible A faint glimmering In the distance The challenge that lies ahead Is all to clear My quest is that light But standing between My Haven Is my Hell Thousands of doorways Leading to endless destinies Some are shortcuts While others are set backs The choices I make as I pass each one Will decide my future My happiness My end __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

12-28-2003, 09:42 PM	#2 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I liked this so much I had to read it out loud a few times. Reading it out loud made it sound so good... WONDERFUL! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

01-03-2004, 04:51 AM	#3 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	you would think that someone would put a few signs up on those doors by now Thanks for making me think __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

01-07-2004, 10:03 PM	#4 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	In my head I can invision this. I see myself running blindly through a darkened hall looking through each doorway, searching for something that seems so distant. __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

01-08-2004, 02:42 AM	#6 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	the only thing i am searching for is peace of mind. i know certain things in my future that could happen yet they are so far away i can not come close to possesing at this moment in time. __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

01-13-2004, 08:08 PM	#7 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	the future holds endless possibilities. When we get to certain crossroads in our lives, will we choose the path we want or the path we need? __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

02-07-2004, 06:11 AM	#8 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	I always enjoy reading what you write, it is pure and of the heart. thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart