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fallen_angel 02-09-2004 12:28 AM

Taking over me
 
Catch me as I fall
No ones here and I fall into myself
This trueth drives me into madness
Dont close your eyes
Dont turn out the light
Ill give up everything just to find you
To live
To love
To believe
You're taking over me
Dont try to fix me
Im not broken
Swallowed within my own screams
Im blinded within these tears
Hidden within myself
Yur're driving me deeper down
Filling me with pain
I could stop this if i will it away
But you've already
Taken over me. . .

ForgottenKnight 02-09-2004 12:45 AM

I like how this flows.
Quote:

Originally posted by fallen_angel
No ones here
We're always here. You're never alone.

fallen_angel 02-09-2004 12:55 AM

that was out of context mister. . . lol oh well thank you

ForgottenKnight 02-09-2004 07:39 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by fallen_angel
that was out of context mister. . . lol oh well thank you
I know. But I had to say it anyways.

fallen_angel 02-09-2004 10:10 PM

i know and thanx for caring

torgone 02-10-2004 08:04 AM

Very true and touching.
This strikes a resonant chord with me.
Keep up the fine writing.


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