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Jolt · 03-25-2004, 07:07 PM

Was I about to go look for ice cream, or do I need to buy new socks?
Should I pour a glass of jim beam, do I need to wind my clocks?
I don't know where my head's been, or where it's going to
Am I bound for the looney bin, or will it be the zoo?

vonstalhein · 03-26-2004, 02:31 PM

Hahahaha. I have no idea what Jim Beam is, but the poem's nice, so you know, good stuff. I think humour is vitally missing from most poems nowadays, good to see some here.

bparker805 · 03-26-2004, 02:43 PM

you managed to encapsulate my father in four lines and 57 words. Great poem though!

03-25-2004, 07:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jolt Insane Location: Over here	on absentmindedness Was I about to go look for ice cream, or do I need to buy new socks? Should I pour a glass of jim beam, do I need to wind my clocks? I don't know where my head's been, or where it's going to Am I bound for the looney bin, or will it be the zoo?

03-26-2004, 02:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	Hahahaha. I have no idea what Jim Beam is, but the poem's nice, so you know, good stuff. I think humour is vitally missing from most poems nowadays, good to see some here. __________________ No Win No Fee

03-26-2004, 02:43 PM	#3 (permalink)
bparker805 is KING! Location: On the path to Valhalla.	you managed to encapsulate my father in four lines and 57 words. Great poem though!