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05-17-2004, 07:45 AM
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Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin
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Open Your Mind
Open your mind and die
Hateful, mightless wrath Open your eyes and fly Go the sightless path The time of God is near Existential Man The lightning rod of fear Quintessential Man
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05-28-2004, 07:22 AM
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Location: Where You Live.
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I think s/he means the religious based subject matter. I agree with the comment (If thats what it means) as i personally find anything related to God hard to stomach, but i loved 'Open your mind and die' Very Evocative!
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05-29-2004, 03:49 AM
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Illusionary
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha |
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05-29-2004, 03:57 AM
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Illusionary
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Much the way this piece would put many off with its content.....
Closed soul breeding a dead mind Open only on Sunday Accepting only those of a kind Take your failing God and bleed with it Destruction a follower of your path Damnation based on love I have no fear of your lords’ wrath It has not the power to give you sight All that I am can feel your hate Yet fail to understand I’ll pray to your God it’s not too late To shed such light as a numb mind can take Closed mind seeding this dead soul Redirect your faith If only your heart you gave control To see there is no false creator, there is only truth There is nothing wrong with the poem....the comment was on the content of the thoughts, not the work itself, perhaps I will refrain from emotional critique, and stick to structure.
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