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flyaway 08-18-2004 01:17 PM

untitled
 
Call me Apollo, for I will pull the sun across the sky
to see the light touch your face.
Call me Neptune, for I will stop the tides to bathe
with you, if only for a moment.
Call me Aries, for I will end all wars so you may
never again see a drop of blood.
Call me Hades, for I will stop the flow of the river
Styx so you and I will never part.
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amonkie 08-18-2004 02:10 PM

Great first post! Welcome to the Literature Thread :)

That was a really creative idea to use the greek mythology in your poem- I could really see each of those mental images :)

riptide4070 08-24-2004 04:50 AM

not bad, I'd love to see more depth in this poem. Thanks for sharing.


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