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GoldenOuroboros · 05-19-2003, 05:52 PM

This is an old story that's in the process of still being worked on. Major writers block at the moment.. or I'm just lazy.. probably the latter of the two

Anyways tell me what you think

The Awakening

I was just reading through a few pages and noticed some of the garbled mistakes. Definetly needs a proof.

Thanks all

GoldenOuroboros · 05-21-2003, 03:49 AM

Aww.. no ones read it yet? or is it too long?

J.R.V.A. · 05-21-2003, 06:41 AM

I think its pretty good. I was drawn into it, and I was going to just read a little, and I found myself not stopping. Very nice. You have a way with words, and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing

GoldenOuroboros · 05-21-2003, 04:47 PM

Cool thanks

GoldenOuroboros · 05-31-2003, 12:55 AM

Aww no one else?

jaker · 05-31-2003, 10:19 AM

stephen king like

Angel · 05-31-2003, 03:56 PM

Well, I gave it an honest shot! I couldn't get it to link me!
And jaker's Stephen King like comment made me even more bent that I couldn't get it!
Perhaps another try later....

Minx · 05-31-2003, 04:01 PM

Great work...I am only part way through but it is mesmerizing. Quite the gift you have!

Angel · 05-31-2003, 04:07 PM

UH! *scowls, stomps foot and pouts!*
Why won't this work for me???????
Okay Angel, breathe...there now, that's better...
One more try later.

05-19-2003, 05:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	The Awakening This is an old story that's in the process of still being worked on. Major writers block at the moment.. or I'm just lazy.. probably the latter of the two Anyways tell me what you think The Awakening I was just reading through a few pages and noticed some of the garbled mistakes. Definetly needs a proof. Thanks all __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

05-21-2003, 03:49 AM	#2 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	Aww.. no ones read it yet? or is it too long? __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

05-21-2003, 06:41 AM	#3 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	I think its pretty good. I was drawn into it, and I was going to just read a little, and I found myself not stopping. Very nice. You have a way with words, and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

05-21-2003, 04:47 PM	#4 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	Cool thanks __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

05-31-2003, 12:55 AM	#5 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	Aww no one else? __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

05-31-2003, 10:19 AM	#6 (permalink)
jaker Crazy	stephen king like

05-31-2003, 03:56 PM	#7 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Well, I gave it an honest shot! I couldn't get it to link me! And jaker's Stephen King like comment made me even more bent that I couldn't get it! Perhaps another try later.... __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

05-31-2003, 04:01 PM	#8 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	Great work...I am only part way through but it is mesmerizing. Quite the gift you have! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

05-31-2003, 04:07 PM	#9 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	UH! scowls, stomps foot and pouts! Why won't this work for me??????? Okay Angel, breathe...there now, that's better... One more try later. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus