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John Henry 11-28-2004 04:51 AM

Shame
 
As long as you are ashamed, you will hide.
As long as you hide you are alone.
As long as you are alone, you have nothing.
When you have nothing you give nothing.
When you give nothing you are nothing.
As long as you are nothing, you are ashamed.

runtuff 11-28-2004 04:55 AM

This was nice to read first thing this morning. Thanks. Especially witht he holiday season upon us and all the positive and negative emotions that go with the season.

K-Wise 11-29-2004 05:16 AM

Sounds like a viscious cycle. Good poem I enjoyed it. Rare for me with really short poems but that was the perfect length for this one. You couldn't have added any more or less. Again good job man. I'll keep a lookout for more of your work.

Asta!!

amonkie 11-29-2004 07:07 AM

So true a cycle.... finding the breaker is always the next stage :) Thanks for sharing!


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