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amonkie · 12-02-2004, 10:09 PM

"On a highway to nothing left" - that is just really a great way to set up your writing.... makes me envision miles of arizona desert. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to the Literature Forum!

K-Wise · 12-03-2004, 03:12 AM

"this distance is your heart beating once for every time mine will have beaten twice."

"I spend every free moment breathing in your letters and your spaces."

Beautiful man. Just beautiful

"and so, with this open ended letter, never for you to read, I will spill my emotions out on the floor."

I know what it's like to write something for someone who you don't plan on showing it to.

Asta!!

itch vaccine · 12-07-2004, 03:53 AM

that is.. great man

i enjoyed reading it so much

vonstalhein · 12-11-2004, 05:39 AM

Yeah. Ruddy good actually. Some of the imagery is slightly emo for my tastes, but it was powerful stuff nontheless, and got me to thinking. Welcome!

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12-02-2004, 10:09 PM	#2 (permalink)
amonkie Drifting Administrator Location: Windy City	"On a highway to nothing left" - that is just really a great way to set up your writing.... makes me envision miles of arizona desert. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to the Literature Forum! __________________ Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna

12-03-2004, 03:12 AM	#3 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	"this distance is your heart beating once for every time mine will have beaten twice." "I spend every free moment breathing in your letters and your spaces." Beautiful man. Just beautiful "and so, with this open ended letter, never for you to read, I will spill my emotions out on the floor." I know what it's like to write something for someone who you don't plan on showing it to. Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

12-11-2004, 05:39 AM	#5 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	Yeah. Ruddy good actually. Some of the imagery is slightly emo for my tastes, but it was powerful stuff nontheless, and got me to thinking. Welcome! __________________ No Win No Fee

12-07-2004, 03:53 AM	#4 (permalink)
itch vaccine Psycho Location: on my spinning computer chair	that is.. great man i enjoyed reading it so much