Midnight_Son

You see me
I see you
You judge me
I’ll judge you

You don’t know me
I don’t know you
Stereotype me
Stereotype you

You tell me I’m hellbound
I’ll call you hypocrite
Tell me the road that you’ve found
I’ll say your full of shit

You point at my tattooed flesh
I’ll laugh at your suit and tie
You say I’m a fucked up mess
I’ll say your living a lie

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It might not be that different
The leap from me to you
Neither one will take the time
To find out if it’s true

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SWM, tattooed, seeks meaningful tits and beer. Enjoys biker mags, pornography, and Sunday morning walks to the liquor store. Winners of erotic hot dog eating contests given priority.

Jadey

From the work you've posted so far I can tell you have a definite style in your writing. A pretty simple style, but fairly straight forward.

Good work.

Eowyn_Vala

I like it! It almost seems more like a song.

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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it

Midnight_Son

it is a song. and thanks.

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SWM, tattooed, seeks meaningful tits and beer. Enjoys biker mags, pornography, and Sunday morning walks to the liquor store. Winners of erotic hot dog eating contests given priority.