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Old 01-14-2005, 10:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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More of my writings & lyrics

We've run each other dry
soaking up the intentions of a good life
dance with our shadows
and sip on the worries
wondering why we're bleeding inside

don't lose yourself now
don't lose yourself now
don't lose yourself now
tomorrow is here

Wanna be forgiven
but don't wanna be forgotten, oh no
pride from our hands
to fix the unbroken
erasing between the lines

don't lose yourself now
don't lose yourself now
don't lose yourself now
tomorrow is here
 
Old 01-14-2005, 10:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Doesn't it make you wonder
how this fell sweetly into place
past the breakage
a window cracked
but just now I realized
this air that's comin' in
takes my breath away

and oddly enough
I know what I feel
isn't it true
oddly enough I feel you

And isn't it funny
how the wind blows
in circling patterns
find a cloud
and place it high
cuz that's where I'll be

and oddly enough
I know who I am
way up here
oddly enough
oddly enough
and oddly enough
I feel true
oddly enough
oddly enough
I feel you
 
Old 01-18-2005, 04:39 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by :::OshnSoul:::
We've run each other dry
soaking up the intentions of a good life
dance with our shadows
and sip on the worries
wondering why we're bleeding inside
Quote:
Originally Posted by :::OshnSoul:::
and oddly enough
I know what I feel
isn't it true
oddly enough I feel you
Wow, those two poems really touch on some stuff that I have been though. I once had a girlfriend who I was with for a year and a half, I could have written the first poem about our relationship and break up. Thank you for posting those.

-Dost
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Old 01-18-2005, 04:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you for the comments. They are very meaningful to me as well. The first one I wrote while initially thinking of my relationship, but began to incorporate the level of humanity and how people in general are.
The second one was more free-spirited, almost with a 'lounge' vibe in mind, of course with someone in particular on my mind.
More to come.............
 
Old 01-21-2005, 06:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Oddly enough
I feel moved.
Wonderful works, Oshn. Can't wait to read more.
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Old 01-22-2005, 07:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Unhinged

This dangling fear's been cut loose
running my mind in circles
projecting my past on the tip of my tongue
if only a screaming muse
my knees folded for tonight
I want to escape but lie still
just coat me with the nightfall
I'll wrap in your sheets
sink into your voice
and then I'll feel at home
just unhinge this heart
I will still come to you
 
Old 01-23-2005, 07:50 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Cool Osh, would you tell me about this one like you did the previous two? What is your fear and why does it dangle? How was it cut loose? What are you trying to escape?

-Dost
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Old 01-25-2005, 04:42 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Oh wow cool someone else posting lyrics. I really liked these...especially that last poem..the very last lines of unhinged were my particular favorites. For the ones that are lyrics..is this just you writing out toons with your acoustic or something? Cause if so thats awesome and you rock! Well you rock either way

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