Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community  

Go Back   Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community > Creativity > Tilted Literature


 
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
Old 01-21-2005, 05:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Amaras's Avatar
 
Location: At my daughter's beck and call.
Poety to my ex

My girlfriend recently broke up with me due to my alcoholism and drug addictions (and the behaviour that usually accompanies the disease). I am in a treatment center for 80 days. Here is the poem I wrote for her when I first fell in love;

Out of my darkness
I saw you arise
With the fire in your soul
Mirrored by thy brown eyes

For all the years I've
Spent twisting in the wind
You have released me
From all of my sins

Now free, let's
laugh and dance
let's engage in
sweet romance

Things are better, I'm 20 days clean.
Drugs and alcohol DO NOT help creativity,
they stifle it.
Diatribe ended.
__________________
Propaganda is to a democracy what the bludgeon is to a totalitarian state.
-Noam Chomsky
Love is a verb, not a noun.
-My Mom
The function of genius is to furnish cretins with ideas twenty years later.
-Louis Aragon, "La Porte-plume," Traite du style, 1928
Amaras is offline  
Old 01-21-2005, 05:41 PM   #2 (permalink)
Oh dear God he breeded
 
Seer666's Avatar
 
Location: Arizona
Good work. On the poem and 20 days. It's a hard struggle, but keep at it. it will be worth it in the end.
__________________
Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.
Seer666 is offline  
Old 01-21-2005, 05:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
Chilled to Perfection
 
ICER's Avatar
 
Location: Dallas, TX
Excellent work, soulful, deep, and descriptive

Congrats on staying clean. Hang in there. Its one step at a time.
__________________
What's the difference between congress and a penitentiary?
One is filled with tax evaders, blackmailers and threats to society.
The other is for housing prisoners.
~~David Letterman
ICER is offline  
Old 01-26-2005, 10:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
Upright
 
Good poem!
And congratulations on the 20 days!!!! that is very cool!!
Fiver is offline  
 

Tags
poety


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT -8. The time now is 08:03 AM.

Tilted Forum Project

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.6.0 PL2
© 2002-2012 Tilted Forum Project

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76