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Old 03-18-2005, 09:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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just a few

Ok well after a long debate I decided to put these here.. they are short and sweet and written in about 10 minutes total.. I'm usually the type that once I write something I burn it or delete it.. I guess I just want to put these here for some reason.

Background: These were written yesterday as I was missing my ex for a few hours (heh) so they are kinda dumb

I'm holding on to you-
Like a tear dangling off an eyelash
You wipe me away-
Like a piece of discarded dream
Silence says everything-
I faintly remember the sparkle of your voice
You need this-
But you don't need me
Emotions stir inside-
Like a fizzed pop bottle
You cut to the bone-
With your decietful eyes
--Me
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Eternity passes with each tick
Slow movements mock my advances
You're gone-
It makes me sick
I want to hate you-
Instead I write songs about you

--Me
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Letters only halfway finished,
Just like what we started
Pieces falling like rain
You've left a stain
Constant reminders indelible
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Old 03-18-2005, 12:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Gucci - they're not dumb! Thanks for not burnin them right away! I love the last one, especially " letters only halfway finished/just like what we started/ pieces falling like rain"
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Old 03-18-2005, 03:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Got to agree here Gucc.....not something to be used as kindling....rather good actually
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